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I really enjoyed reading this. It is set out like a letter and it is easy to read as you have separated your points into paragraphs which you have developed well. Your opinions are honest and respectful and I think Harry would appreciate reading your comments (even though I disagree about the Arsenal goal). I hope he responds to you with the photo you want. I have one already; it's on my dartboard as I'm a gooner!!
I loved your letter but my mum would of loved it way more. you really let your feelings go to this letter. I thought your letter could of have more description in it. * Letter set out * Descripted writing T = more Harry Kane facts or things
HHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Its me I really like letter but I think saints are so much better